Date: February 03, 2013 1:17 PM Title: Behind Enemy Lines
What has Bella discovered?
I loved reading in Esme's point of view. The markers you use to seperate the POVs are very usefull and appreciated. The pictures keep things clear.
Date: February 03, 2013 12:50 PM Title: Behind Enemy Lines
I'm intrigued, what is Bella planning?
Date: October 22, 2012 1:53 AM Title: Behind Enemy Lines
I really like this story! I've always been curious about the D/s lifestyle, but I'm a chicken shit, lol. Seriously, you see alot of submissive Bella, or bondage (again Bella) and currents like that, but this is the first Submissive Jasper I've read. I love how you play on his military training, his gift, even his dual nature and tie it all into a cohesive and believable character. I also enjoy how you manage to make a dominant Bella without turning her into an entirely different character, using instinct, intuition and her accepting nature. I know you haven't updated in a while, but I really hope you haven't abondoned this fic! I look forward to the exploration of this particular relationship, and the continuation of the plot you've got everyone dancin' to.
Date: October 20, 2012 3:39 AM Title: Let Your Fingers Do the Talking
Date: August 25, 2012 10:12 PM Title: Behind Enemy Lines
Loved it!
Date: August 25, 2012 9:57 PM Title: Behind Enemy Lines
Loved it!
Date: August 25, 2012 8:37 PM Title: Behind Enemy Lines
Loved it!
Date: August 25, 2012 3:45 PM Title: Behind Enemy Lines
Loved it! Way to go Bella!
Date: August 25, 2012 3:17 PM Title: Behind Enemy Lines
Loved it!
Date: August 25, 2012 2:53 PM Title: Behind Enemy Lines
Loved it!
Date: August 25, 2012 2:24 PM Title: Behind Enemy Lines
Loved it!
Date: August 25, 2012 2:11 PM Title: Behind Enemy Lines
Loved it!
Date: August 25, 2012 1:50 PM Title: Behind Enemy Lines
Loved it!
Date: August 25, 2012 1:30 PM Title: Behind Enemy Lines
Loved it!
Date: August 25, 2012 1:08 PM Title: Behind Enemy Lines
Loved it!
Date: August 25, 2012 12:51 PM Title: Behind Enemy Lines
Loved it!
Date: August 25, 2012 12:25 PM Title: Behind Enemy Lines
Loved it!
Date: August 24, 2012 11:46 PM Title: Behind Enemy Lines
Loved it!
Date: August 24, 2012 9:56 PM Title: Behind Enemy Lines
Okay, I'm seriously hooked to this story. Awesome work. I hope you update.
Date: August 24, 2012 7:06 PM Title: Behind Enemy Lines
Loved it!
Date: August 24, 2012 6:39 PM Title: Behind Enemy Lines
LUV, LUV this chapter. Heavy, but very needed. Excellent work.
Date: August 24, 2012 6:19 PM Title: Behind Enemy Lines
Loved it!
Date: August 24, 2012 5:57 PM Title: Behind Enemy Lines
Loved it! I really don't like Edward!
Date: August 24, 2012 5:27 PM Title: Behind Enemy Lines
Loved it!
Date: August 24, 2012 4:34 PM Title: Behind Enemy Lines
Holy sh**, what a drama! And just so other reviewers know, this story will have you thinking about it when you are away from whatever internet capable device you read it on. Seriously addictive!


