Date: November 12, 2012 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 10, Jasper Outtake
I Love this story. I truly do not want to seem ingrateful for your time or talent that it took to write this story, however, if I may be so bold as to BEG for more? ;) PLEASE and Thank You!
Date: November 06, 2012 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 6
Aww i love this.
You tell it so well. I can't stop reading and it's almost 6 in the morning. Haven't slept yet. All because off this story. :) keep it up. Oh no it's finished. Please make another one with Peter as her family. Maybe one with jasper in it to :)
oh or if you could. Maybe one with Emmett I am so much an Emmett fan :) please. It would mean a lot. :)
Date: October 22, 2012 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 3
I've noticed you have a few problems with staying in the same tense- you switch from present to past and back sometimes within the same paragraph. I can usually pass over it with little annoyance, but it distracts from your engaging storytelling.
I'd recommend getting someone to look over this story again with a fine-toothed comb to resolve the tense switching and other occasional grammatical mistakes.
Otherwise, I'm really enjoying this so far! Thanks for sharing!
Date: August 20, 2012 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am loving this story! Hope there is more to come!! Loving Cauis and Bella!!
Date: August 13, 2012 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 9
I liked that chapter ending! Now I'm wondering who else is seeking vengeance...
Date: August 13, 2012 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 9
Really enjoying your story or should I say enjoyed your story....i'm not sure yet ;)
Date: August 12, 2012 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 8
ohhhh Ellie I can't wait to read more :)
Date: August 11, 2012 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 8
So unfair lol, I want to see the reactions of the whole coven! The Cullens I'm sure will b pissed n shocked, I also hope u give Bella an opportunity to see why they kept Peter away
Date: August 11, 2012 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 8
Found this story last night. Sorry I didn't review the other chapters they were all good. This chapter was great though! I can't wait to see the confrontation between Bella and the Cullens. If next chapter is the last chapter I really hope you decide to do the sequal. I'll be waiting for the update!
Date: August 08, 2012 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 8
I'm so pleased that Cauis killed Victoria. Not fair leaving it there. Looking forward to next chapter.
Date: August 08, 2012 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 8
love it, love it, love it...... can't wait for more. :)
Date: August 08, 2012 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 8
LOVED it!! Can't wait for more.
Date: August 02, 2012 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 7
I'm glad that Bella and Caius are getting a little closer. :)
Date: July 28, 2012 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 6
Hi I've just found your story and so far I'm loving it. Well done I really don't like the Cullen's and even Jasper has gon down in my opinion. Looking forward to the next chapters.
Date: July 25, 2012 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 6
Love it! I can't wait to see what happens when the Cullen's see her and find out who her mate is! More please.
She knows who her mate is, she's stated the fact too... It's Caius.
Date: July 25, 2012 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 4
Oh! I like it! More please!
Ch 5 and 6 will be posted today
Date: July 25, 2012 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 4
This is so good! I can't wait for more!
ch 5 and 6 will be up today
Date: July 18, 2012 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 4
Date: July 17, 2012 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 4
Her great grandfather is Peter.
Date: July 15, 2012 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 4
Where is the rest? I want more!
Date: July 12, 2012 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 4
Can't wait for more. :)
Date: July 06, 2012 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 3
That was intense. Caius was kind of an ass. -laughs- I hope he softens up toward Bella. :)
Date: July 05, 2012 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow, interesting twist on the original glad to see Bella getting a backbone, though it a rather unothidox fashion. On to the next chapter now!
Thank you :)
Date: July 01, 2012 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 2
i cant wait for more
Date: June 29, 2012 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 2
Ok I am hooked - love Bella and Paul and Jared!! Can't wait for the next update:)