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Keep Awake by JaspersCherry M
In a world where humans are no longer in charge, one human stands out. Can she...
In a world where humans are no longer in charge, one human stands out. Can she...
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Reviewer: ifonly Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12, 2012 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 10, Jasper Outtake
Date: November 12, 2012 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 10, Jasper Outtake
I Love this story. I truly do not want to seem ingrateful for your time or talent that it took to write this story, however, if I may be so bold as to BEG for more? ;) PLEASE and Thank You!
Reviewer: TeamEmmettandKellan Signed [Report This]
Date: November 06, 2012 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 6
Date: November 06, 2012 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 6
Aww i love this.
You tell it so well. I can't stop reading and it's almost 6 in the morning. Haven't slept yet. All because off this story. :) keep it up. Oh no it's finished. Please make another one with Peter as her family. Maybe one with jasper in it to :)
oh or if you could. Maybe one with Emmett I am so much an Emmett fan :) please. It would mean a lot. :)
Reviewer: LoveintheBlood Signed [Report This]
Date: October 22, 2012 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 3
Date: October 22, 2012 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 3
I've noticed you have a few problems with staying in the same tense- you switch from present to past and back sometimes within the same paragraph. I can usually pass over it with little annoyance, but it distracts from your engaging storytelling.
I'd recommend getting someone to look over this story again with a fine-toothed comb to resolve the tense switching and other occasional grammatical mistakes.
Otherwise, I'm really enjoying this so far! Thanks for sharing!
Reviewer: ShOrTcAkE Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20, 2012 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
Date: August 20, 2012 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am loving this story! Hope there is more to come!! Loving Cauis and Bella!!
Reviewer: Gabby0515 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2012 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 9
Date: August 13, 2012 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 9
I liked that chapter ending! Now I'm wondering who else is seeking vengeance...
Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2012 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 9
Date: August 13, 2012 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 9
Really enjoying your story or should I say enjoyed your story....i'm not sure yet ;)
Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 12, 2012 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 8
Date: August 12, 2012 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 8
ohhhh Ellie I can't wait to read more :)
Reviewer: Canter22 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11, 2012 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 8
Date: August 11, 2012 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 8
So unfair lol, I want to see the reactions of the whole coven! The Cullens I'm sure will b pissed n shocked, I also hope u give Bella an opportunity to see why they kept Peter away
Reviewer: Gabby0515 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11, 2012 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 8
Date: August 11, 2012 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 8
Found this story last night. Sorry I didn't review the other chapters they were all good. This chapter was great though! I can't wait to see the confrontation between Bella and the Cullens. If next chapter is the last chapter I really hope you decide to do the sequal. I'll be waiting for the update!
Reviewer: Tinkerbell Blake Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08, 2012 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 8
Date: August 08, 2012 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 8
I'm so pleased that Cauis killed Victoria. Not fair leaving it there. Looking forward to next chapter.
Reviewer: trbuie Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08, 2012 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 8
Date: August 08, 2012 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 8
love it, love it, love it...... can't wait for more. :)
Reviewer: mickeydee777 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08, 2012 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 8
Date: August 08, 2012 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 8
LOVED it!! Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: trbuie Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2012 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 7
Date: August 02, 2012 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 7
I'm glad that Bella and Caius are getting a little closer. :)
Reviewer: Tinkerbell Blake Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28, 2012 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 6
Date: July 28, 2012 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 6
Hi I've just found your story and so far I'm loving it. Well done I really don't like the Cullen's and even Jasper has gon down in my opinion. Looking forward to the next chapters.
Reviewer: ccgnme Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25, 2012 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 6
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Date: July 25, 2012 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 6
Love it! I can't wait to see what happens when the Cullen's see her and find out who her mate is! More please.
Author's Response:
She knows who her mate is, she's stated the fact too... It's Caius.
Reviewer: UldAses Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25, 2012 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 4
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Date: July 25, 2012 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 4
Oh! I like it! More please!
:3
Author's Response:
Ch 5 and 6 will be posted today
Reviewer: ccgnme Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25, 2012 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 4
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Date: July 25, 2012 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 4
This is so good! I can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
ch 5 and 6 will be up today
Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2012 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 4
Date: July 18, 2012 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 4
good update
Reviewer: Alien12 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 17, 2012 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 4
Date: July 17, 2012 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 4
Her great grandfather is Peter.
Reviewer: moonprincess623 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15, 2012 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 4
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Date: July 15, 2012 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 4
Where is the rest? I want more!
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Reviewer: trbuie Signed [Report This]
Date: July 12, 2012 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 4
Date: July 12, 2012 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 4
Can't wait for more. :)
Reviewer: trbuie Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06, 2012 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 3
Date: July 06, 2012 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 3
That was intense. Caius was kind of an ass. -laughs- I hope he softens up toward Bella. :)
Reviewer: Skydancinghobbit Signed [Report This]
Date: July 05, 2012 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 2
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Date: July 05, 2012 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow, interesting twist on the original glad to see Bella getting a backbone, though it a rather unothidox fashion. On to the next chapter now!
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01, 2012 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 2
Date: July 01, 2012 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 2
i cant wait for more
Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29, 2012 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 2
Date: June 29, 2012 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 2
Ok I am hooked - love Bella and Paul and Jared!! Can't wait for the next update:)