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Reviews For The Stepfather
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Reviewer: Mels Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12, 2013 1:38 AM Title: The Conclusion

well damn. I didn't see that coming. I thought when I read there would be character death that Edward would kill Carlisle...not that he'd go psycho & kill himself & Bella. 
Nicely done!

 
 
Reviewer: drtammy1511 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01, 2012 8:20 PM Title: The Conclusion

Holy Cow, Lexi...  I always said that I'd kill you if you killed Aro, but now you've killed both Edward AND Bella!  I won't put anything past you...

 

Tammy

 
 
Reviewer: katemarlin Signed [Report This]
Date: November 20, 2011 1:27 AM Title: The Stepfather

I loved it!   You should definitely continue this craziness... absolutely a turn-on... guess that makes me sick..LOL

 
 
Reviewer: Lady Tazz Signed [Report This]
Date: October 16, 2011 8:50 AM Title: The Conclusion

This was just way fucked woman...lol

 
 
Reviewer: Crazyforcullen104 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17, 2011 6:33 PM Title: The Conclusion

Really enjoyed this fucked up little story, of course they had to die and loved the tragic ending

 
 
Reviewer: addicted-to-bedward Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16, 2011 12:11 PM Title: The Conclusion

Jeez! I know I should be crying..but I'm laughing. It's too freaking funny!

 
 
Reviewer: addicted-to-bedward Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16, 2011 11:37 AM Title: The Stepfather

This is different.... Yes. What the fuck is accurate. LOL

 
 
Reviewer: grayeyedgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30, 2011 6:40 AM Title: The Stepfather

This story is utterly ridiculous, and yet I love it.

 
 
Reviewer: JRAD Signed [Report This]
Date: June 25, 2011 7:47 PM Title: The Conclusion

Wow, not much else to say to that...  Well written though!

 
 
Reviewer: bellamarie545 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2011 2:06 AM Title: The Conclusion

I really liked this two-shot! Normally I am all about reading the HEA, but this ending was awesome. I MAY have laughed out loud after I finished reading because I was so different from other stories I've read on here, TWCS, and ffn. LOVED it. And I would love to read a Carlisle POV response after all this happened!

 
 
Reviewer: MrsJim Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2011 10:03 AM Title: The Conclusion

I fuckin knew he was either gonna drive off the cliff or push her over it...I bet that cop is gonna feel mighty stupid and guilty now

This was so fucked up...but I'm laughing...does that mean I have problems too? lol

 
 
Reviewer: MrsJim Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2011 9:18 AM Title: The Stepfather

Correct. What. The. Fuck.

I'm actually liking...poor Edward the innocent soclose to these crazy fuckers

 
 
Reviewer: TheTowelsRLinted Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2011 5:38 AM Title: The Conclusion

Loved the story. :) I did not see Edward goin crazy coming.

 
 
Reviewer: foufymaus Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2011 1:57 AM Title: The Conclusion

*blink*

*blink blink*

*blink blink blink*

Oh... my...word... I loved it! I voted on the poll and i totally want to see the aftermath. OMG wow...Shit, that'll make my brain explode Just the possibilities. the what if Edward lived... guilt city with a side of angst from both Cullen men. If Bella lives ...self hate plus a side of guilt. Or if they both did that Grease flying off in the car to heaven thing then wow.. How will the parents deal OMG and she hasn't even gotten her shit yet. All that and she doesn't get the Mac book.

 

I love it! more please. I voted on the ffn poll btw i'm also known as thepinktabby on twitter and ffn.

 
 
Reviewer: Anadabyel Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2011 12:55 AM Title: The Stepfather

DAMN!  This is awesomely wild!!



Author's Response:

hahaha...glad you liked it. This was a wild ride for my warped brain too. lol. 

 
 
Reviewer: RobinB78 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05, 2011 8:28 AM Title: The Conclusion

Deep and dark.  A little on the sick and crazy side.  ;-)  Overall though, I thought it was decent.  Glad you were able to get it out of your head. 

 
 
Reviewer: RobinB78 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05, 2011 7:50 AM Title: The Stepfather

OMG! So dark and totally unlike anything you usually come across with E&B.  Good work! ;-)

 
 
Reviewer: JaspersIzzy Signed [Report This]
Date: February 18, 2011 6:08 PM Title: The Conclusion

I don't think you should be apologizing for shit. I have to say, and I hope you don't get offended by this, but I was laughing my ass off at how stupid Bella was. She is a fucking moron. She had to know that he would totally flip his shit. Emmett (snickers at his tiny dick) was totally right. She was just too damn silly to realize it. And Carlisle? Dude, he is such a freak. Wonder how he reacted to hearing the news? Did he even remotely give a shit his son and "whore" died from driving off a cliff? 

Anyway, I enjoyed this. I really did, in a fucked up sort of way. I hope you decide to keep it up, at least here. I won't let anyone flame you. I don't play that on this site. Thanks for posting. It was a nice way to kill some time while I fight off a migraine headache. lol Nicely done. 

Izzy



Author's Response:

Hey! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. This was honestly just an idea that popped into my head. An idea that I just had to run with. I write mostly fluff--insert drama--fluff....And I just had to get this out, and since I am not so used to 'the heavy', I told the story through Bella's eyes. Her nonchalant, and yes, dumb-ass demeanor made it so much easier. I laughed my own ass off during most of this, and especially after I typed that last sentence. I was like "Holy Shit! I just killed them," I said fuck it, and just posted it. It's not beta'd, and a tad on the dark side, so that's why I thought I'd get flamed...(shrugs) I'm glad you enjoyed it though...

Again, thanks for reading. 

 

Lexi

 
 
Reviewer: CarlislaCooper Signed [Report This]
Date: February 18, 2011 1:00 PM Title: The Stepfather

Wow. This blows everything I've written away. HOT! I love it!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing. I am so glad that you enjoyed it, and thought it was hot. 

 

Thanks again, 

Lexi

 
 
Reviewer: Nilaja Signed [Report This]
Date: February 18, 2011 2:12 AM Title: The Stepfather

*Stunned silence*

 

W....O....W....

 

Didn't see that coming! Talk about surprise shock ending...Awesome! 

2 very enthusiastic thumbs up

 
 
Reviewer: fangrl Signed [Report This]
Date: February 18, 2011 2:09 AM Title: The Conclusion

Whoa! I knew this was going to end up in a dark place, I just wasn't expecting it to happen this fast. 

 
 
Reviewer: fangrl Signed [Report This]
Date: February 18, 2011 2:00 AM Title: The Conclusion

Whoa! I knew this was going to end up in a dark place, I just wasn't expecting it to happen this fast. 

 
 
Reviewer: nora yar Signed [Report This]
Date: February 17, 2011 11:05 PM Title: The Conclusion

It was much good. Please do not do it any more. Where are my CC,EJ and mostly Michael? I need litle light.

Love you regardless

Nora Yar

 
 
Reviewer: ammNI Signed [Report This]
Date: February 17, 2011 8:43 PM Title: The Stepfather

Carlisle is definitely messed up and Geekward was just too cute...especially with his jammie pants! lol Great beginning and I'm looking forward to reading more.
~Anna-Margaret
xx

 
 
Reviewer: nora yar Signed [Report This]
Date: February 17, 2011 12:32 AM Title: The Stepfather

OMG WOW WTF LEXI ?

Please do not stop. I need to know.

Yours loving

Nora Yar

 
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