Sorry for spelling.My first story.Takes place in NM.Edward leaves Bella,but...
Date: July 09, 2012 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wow those are some juicy lemons. Enjoying reading
Date: June 16, 2012 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 5
ho man i love this atoire a lot big time and i can wait for a new cahpter to be put up big time your are soooo hot big time
Date: June 16, 2012 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
dddddddddaaaaaaaaammmmmm at was sooo hot big time man i love this atoire a lot big time
Date: June 21, 2011 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 3
hope she does well...
Author's Response:
Don't worry, she will!
Date: June 21, 2011 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 2
WOW...I WONDER WHAT WILL HAPPEN NOW?
Author's Response:
We'll have to wait and see...
Date: June 21, 2011 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
DAMMMMMNNNNN!!!!!!
Author's Response:
I think you said it right!!!
FJ
Date: June 16, 2011 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 5
Great character interaction between Carlisle and Bella, both the passionate and the emotional types; also well written dialog, drama, plot and its development, and last, but by no means least, deliciously and decadently detailed loving between Carlisle and Bella... I still say that she is one lucky wench, you know?
;~D
VERY WELL written - I'm looking forward to reading additional chapters - keep up the good work.
=)
Author's Response:
THanks so much for taking time to review...Yes, she is extremely lucky!!!
FJ
Date: June 15, 2011 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 4
Who's afraid of the big, bad wolf????
Thanks so much!!!
FJ
Date: June 15, 2011 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 4
It is fantastic how they are taking care of each other like one big happy family; especially the police officers keeping the hungry wolf-like reporters at bay, hey?
Great story, keep up the good work.
=)
Date: June 15, 2011 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 3
Bella is a very lucky girl to have such a compassionate, loving, and caring man such as Carlisle as her beau, you know?
;~D
Well done.
=)
Author's Response:
I'm so jealous of her!
FJ
Date: June 15, 2011 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow, major bummer about Charlie having been killed in the car accident and Sam being so injured that he is about to join him.
Very sad and dramatic chapter - well done.
=)
Author's Response:
I agree, I hated doing it, but it took it's own turn in writing.
FJ
Date: June 15, 2011 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Holy mother of God that was hotter than six kinds of He££ - I love it! Bella is truly one lucky gal, you know?
;~D
VERY WELL written!
=D
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!!! LOL!!!
FJ
Date: April 10, 2011 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 3
Good story so far. I was almost certain that the first chapter was a "scene" set up by a married Carlisle and Bella acting out a fantasy. I was happy to see the story continue! It will be interesting to see where you go with this plot...will the conflict be a May/December romance or something else...can't wait to see!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: March 31, 2011 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 3
He's so sweet with her. But sad at the death of Charlie.
Author's Response:
He is very sweet. One advantage of being with an older man.
Date: March 31, 2011 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 2
So sad bout Charlie.
Author's Response:
I know...I didn't want to do that, but my mind does weird things.
Date: March 31, 2011 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
That was hot ! <3 it.
Author's Response:
I know...One can dream...LOL!
Date: March 25, 2011 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 3
i love this x
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: March 08, 2011 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 2
loved this ! sp beautifully sad x
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: March 05, 2011 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh hell yeah!
Author's Response:
Thank you!!! I agree!
Date: March 04, 2011 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow! you should so continue!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
Date: March 04, 2011 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
HOLY SPIT! This is SO HOT! I think that I need to take an ice bath or something!
Author's Response:
LOL!!! Thanks girl!


