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Fighting For Love by KCLutz4475 MA
This story is adopted from Nikki Whitlock... Jasper and Bella meet their first...
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Reviewer: LoveRobP10 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 24, 2011 10:07 PM Title: Inside the box

Of course I hate that this has to end. I loved this story.  Not that it's long but I've been here since the beginning.  I love your stuff though.  Your an awesome writer.

 
 
Reviewer: jendill Signed [Report This]
Date: July 04, 2011 3:58 PM Title: The Matrix

was that an ultimatum... cuz from your a/n i wasn't sure... ;) j/k

I'm so glad she remembered after her less than stellar night... can't wait to see how they work it out in the future!

 

 
 
Reviewer: MirandaMasen Signed [Report This]
Date: July 02, 2011 6:43 PM Title: The Matrix

I'm so glad they finally got together. I'm so loving this Bella and all her personalities.

Favorite lines this chapter:

"You look…gorgeous," he said, eyeing my cleavage. We had just exited the subway, and were walking in Midtown. It's not the first time he's said it either. He's told me so many times, and I feel gorgeous.

"Wonderbra," I said, pointing to it.

He smirked at me. "As in…later when I take it off of you, I'll wonder where they went?" he laughed.

I nudged him with my shoulder. "Ass…"

 
 
Reviewer: LoveRobP10 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 02, 2011 4:42 PM Title: The Matrix

I hope he fucks her so good that it will leave her speechless.  Especially after being with Jacob, she needs it. 

Loved the chapter.  Look forward to the next.

 
 
Reviewer: jendill Signed [Report This]
Date: June 22, 2011 5:38 PM Title: Big Me

muahahaahhaah! That was a totally awesome chapter!

 
 
Reviewer: LoveRobP10 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 20, 2011 12:47 AM Title: Big Me

OH WOW....I laughed so hard at this chapter, I ended up having a coughing fit.  I'm still laughing.  I love this story.  

 
 
Reviewer: SheLovesEdward Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2011 2:48 PM Title: Jax and his Motorcycle Momma

I think this story is too cute! Please keep writing. I love quiet storm also, and would have reviewed that a long time ago, but I read from my phone & just figured out how to leave a review, lol!

 
 
Reviewer: LoveRobP10 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2011 6:22 PM Title: Jax and his Motorcycle Momma

I love these two.  I can't wait until they get together.  I hope it happens soon.

 
 
Reviewer: luvsux Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2011 10:11 PM Title: Jax and his Motorcycle Momma

Damn! When are one of them going to step up to the plate?

 
 
Reviewer: jendill Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2011 3:41 PM Title: When WASPs Buzz

I cannot tell you how much I LOVE this story!

I cheered the fight(s) and I can't wait for them to bump uglies!

 

 
 
Reviewer: LoveRobP10 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2011 12:56 PM Title: When WASPs Buzz

I absolutely loved this chapter.  I guess you could say it was KICK ASS. Can't wait til the next chapter.  LOVE THIS STORY.

 
 
Reviewer: thecullenexperience Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2011 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 1

The idea of Emmet and Bella just skeeves me the fuck out. Haha.

I snickered quite alot, the Edward/ Bella dialogue was very entertaining.

I am going to love this story, I can tell. So yes please keep going,

 
 
Reviewer: LoveRobP10 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2011 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

Another story to add to my favs.  Please keep going.  I love your writing.  This story is definitely worth the letters used to write it.

Good luck on future chapters.

 
 
Reviewer: jendill Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2011 6:40 PM Title: Odd Bird

I am IN LOVE with this! It makes me laugh so hard, love that they can't stand each other one minute and want to rape each other the next.

 

 
 
Reviewer: dirtymind Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2011 9:20 PM Title: Odd Bird

this is a fuckin' amazing story!

 
 
Reviewer: sarahbella89 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2011 10:48 PM Title: Hoes in Different Area Codes

wow this is a good story. there really isnt another one out there like this. it is really good and i cant wait for the next part.

 
 
Reviewer: luvsux Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2011 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

4/27/11 (1)

OMG! I laughed so hard, with tears, that my son came running into the room demanding to what was so funny. I had him read this and he also had a good laugh.

I would love to see this continued in the future. It is so worth waiting for.

 
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