Date: October 10, 2012 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
"Depraved" was one of the choices, right? Certainly was.
June Cleaver meets Jeffrey Dahmer. Sort of.
Jasper was hot. As usual.
Date: June 30, 2011 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
Really cool story!! Awesome how you mixed the violence and gore with fluff!! =)
Date: June 30, 2011 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 1
Yup definitely sick. xx
Date: June 25, 2011 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
Good. Very Good.
Date: June 14, 2011 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
Dark tale. Nice.
Date: June 14, 2011 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, that was seriously fucked up. Totally and utterly depraved.
Awesome! *LOL* I loved it!! The best part is the pseudo 50's housewife feel of Bella and how nonchalant they all are about it. And so very sweet at the end. Awwwww... how sweet of dear Jasper to clean all the blood off his wife after their playtime. This was completely messed-up-in-the-head-ish, yet utterly compelling. Nice.
Date: June 14, 2011 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
All the above and fuckawesome! I loved this, but I'm fucked up in the head, so, yeah! Not the most reliable source of feedback. lol
Wow, great job. I saw your tweets about it a few times and started to ask what you were writing. Glad I waited this one out. It was so very disturbing, but very well done in a creepy sort of way. Bravo, darling, bravo!