Reviewer: LetsJustDance Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08, 2012 2:39 PM Title: Bay Ridge Avenue - An Edward Flashback

What other outtakes do you plan? I think I've read them all, to this point...and, the ones attached to Quiet Storm. Did I tell you LATELY that I LOVE these stories and, generally, I don't do all-human. But, you've rocked these characters, like Edward rocks Bella's p..well, you know. Trying to keep my review PG. *hugs* let me hear from you.

Reviewer: bellastew Signed [Report This]
Date: October 14, 2011 7:22 AM Title: Bay Ridge Avenue - An Edward Flashback

Nice taking a look at Edward's beggining... But I was sad for Carlisle... Edward really released the beast...

Reviewer: bellastew Signed [Report This]
Date: October 08, 2011 5:12 PM Title: The Hunt part one starring Aro

Just came by to check this outtake! I usually don't like other POVs, but after reading the Carlisle/Honeymoon one, I knew you wouldn't dissapoint!!! :)

Reviewer: Cyper22 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05, 2011 5:33 PM Title: Bay Ridge Avenue - An Edward Flashback

I LOVE these outakes!! 

 

I would love to see an outake from Jaspers point of view getting ready for and completing the South Carolina job.  Get inside his characters head a little bit.....

 

Outakes are such a great way to see a little bit more of the main characters and a great way to see the same story from different points of view - you do such a great job painting these characters into real imaginable people that I can't wait to keep reading what you write! 

 

I swear I'm checking in every day to see if you have anything new posted - you do a really really good job! 

 

Thanks for sharing your creativity!

Jess

Reviewer: MusicLife2288 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 04, 2011 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 28 Outtake Starring Carlisle

I wish youbwould have got deeper into Carlise's feelings for bella, maybe you can do an out take of what was going through is mind that one night at eclipes even if he wont remember it.

Reviewer: handsonu Signed [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2011 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 28 Outtake Starring Carlisle

Ok so his staying there makes more sense now but he's still a stupid idiot.

Reviewer: handsonu Signed [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2011 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 28 Outtake Starring Carlisle

Ok so his staying there makes more sense now but he's still a stupid idiot.

Reviewer: handsonu Signed [Report This]
Date: June 15, 2011 10:20 PM Title: The Hunt part one starring Aro

Ok so I totally love thinking of him looking like Tatum channing. (Or Channing Tatum I can never remember) and squeeeeeeeee. Protecting MC and all. Love him. I think secretly he is all of our favorite Guy.

Reviewer: MirandaMasen Signed [Report This]
Date: June 15, 2011 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 28 Outtake Starring Carlisle

All I can say is WOW...I love me some Carlisle. It was great to see things from his POV!

Reviewer: MirandaMasen Signed [Report This]
Date: June 15, 2011 4:55 PM Title: The Hunt Part Two Starring Aro

So Aro whacking Alec is clear now because him disobeying Skip was really getting to me. I think that Skip understands cause if the situation was reversed and it was him and Bella he would've done the same thing. Poor Lauren---she loves him but don't wanna say it because he may not feel the same especially since he admitted to sleeping around. But she should deinitely invest in a dictionary---he's saying how he feels about her in Italian. that shit ain't cool Aro.

Reviewer: MirandaMasen Signed [Report This]
Date: June 15, 2011 3:52 PM Title: The Hunt part one starring Aro

I freaking Love Aro!! I was really starting to miss My Em and my Jazz but Aro makes up for them being semi-absent. He is so funny and sexy!