That was a good one!

Just found this story and read it all the way through today.  I loved it.  Your Bella was so powerful and sure of herself as opposed to the meek version from the books.   Her relationship with Caius took some interesting turns.  I was glad to see some love in addition to the typical vampire possessiveness.  I think my favorite part of your story was Bella's familiar, Lillith.  What a cool addition to the story!  Also loved that Bella shared her powers with Caius, good way to further their bond.

Great job!  Looking forward to reading your Jasper/Bella fic next.  That is one of my favorites pairings!

great ending... glad that Edward and Esme and Carlisle got what they deserved! Can't wait to read your B/J story!

uh oh... I am thinking Edward's death will be slow and as painful as possible. Can't wait to read more

uh oh :( At least Peter was able to help! Can't wait to read more!

Oh no...Bella is already suffering through her ordeal with Edward...
Thank the gods for Peter's gift...If not for him it could've taken them forever to find her...Can't wait for their arrival in the castle...Hope they'll save Edward up for Bella to extract her too horrible for words revenge on him and torture him until she is recovered enough to do so...

Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to read and review the last few chapters :D So glad you liked them! Chapter 13 is off to the beta so it will be up as soon as I get it back. Writing it made me sad :( I'll send you a teaser for being the first to review!

Omg, I can't belive I missed this update until now...I'd have reviewed earlier had I ssen it before today...!
I loved the reception the Cullen's got from Bella despite being there on a mission to warn her, they deserved to face the consequences of their actions...they failed said mission terribly...at least they know who captured her...hopefully they'll find her in time to prevent the worst from happening, namely Alice's vision coming true...

Great chapter! ... wow Edward has lost it... and I can't believe that Carlisle and Esme are willing to stand aside and not do anything.

Stupi stupid Edward...If this asshole thinks he is getting away with this shit he is dumber than I ever thought...Can't wait to see them tear him to pieces...I don't understand how Carlisle and Esme can just sit there and do NOTHING...I wouldn't expect them to be the ones to kill him if there are others available to do the deed bit doing nothing when the girl they claimed as a daughter is the intended torture and rape victim...Wonder what they'd do of Edward in his insanity would try to do this to Alice or Rose...Would they sit by idly as well or would they try to stop him? Or is it just that they don't love Bella as much as they said?

Great chapter!! Glad that he was able to wake her... but I wonder if there will be any truth in what the shop owner said about her being different while being trapped wherever she was for 6 months.. .hmm

Can't wait to read the next one!

-Kate

I like this story. It brings something more to the table.

Really cute how worried and lvong hard-ass Caius can be. Nice to see that he hasn't completely lost touch with his softer side. But it's a good thing you won't turn him into a softie comletely! =)
He took a really long fucking time to got to the witch that sold the book with the ritual in it to Isabella...HE could've avoided so much of this worry...
Wonder what this other realm was like, what Isabella saw there when she was stuck...Will she tell?

Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to read and review! Yeah I had to throw in some mushy Cai too just so that everyone knows that he does have a softer side it's just very rare that it comes out. I can't go making him the mushy lovey type all the way though that would make me sick lol. Not sure why I made it so long before the thought of going to the old woman came to him I think I just needed to move the timeline up and couldn't think of another way to be honest. Can't say whether she will tell anything that she saw in the other realm yet. I'm not even sure myself!

OMG to that ending!!

I just found this story and I am loving it so much!! Can't wait to read more!

Wow,that was spellbinding!!!I was rivetted and can't wait for your next installment...I'd really like to see this finish itself out.

Just in case you don't update before the holiday have a happy one.

Charlie's letter was really mean. How parents can cast out their child like that just because they don't follow the same path is beyond me...He could just accept her for what she is. Ahe wouldn't demand of him to change to the Dark Arts and he shouldn't demand of her to go back to light...So little tolerance...
I liked the scientia familiares spell. Parseltongue is so very intriguing. =)
And sharing her powers with her soulmate is awesome. =)

Author's Response:

It was mean :( And as a parent of two myself I can say no matter what my kids do they are still mine and I would be there for them. Oh and the sharing powers with soulmate thing just popped into my head. In the future of this story that will come in handy ;) Thanks for reviewing!

I love this story, because, Both of them still are fighting the mating pull but still together .. I love that they both can be in control and can't wait to read more.

MORE Please??? I love it !!!!!I even love the way they realize there is a fine line between love and Hate!!!!!As I said before my offer of help still stands if you are interested.I'm sure I can find a real spell or two for you!!!!!!Hope all is well and I hope to hear from you soon.

You are doing just fine.Everything I have read so far in this has held me spellbound! I like the dominate Caius he's magnificent.Keep going and my offer still stands...

OMG!!!!What do I say to that...YOU DID GREAT!!!!!! That's basically the reaction I have to him. That white haired vampire certainly knows how to make a girls blood boil.So much for wishing he was real!!!Keep up the good work.I love it and this will be added to my favorites!!!

Now I feel it is getting interesting.Enter stage left the golden white haired demon from hell Caius.I can't wait to see her reaction to him,hehehe!!!If she has the same one I have we are in for one heck of a roller coaster ride!!!!

This explains alot.It's very good.I have a feeling Bella and Jane will be the best of friends.

I really like the storyline and where this is going and would like to read more.Ishould mention to you that I have noticed some typo's and misspeled wording,but all in all it's very good.
I am not a beta but if you want I am offering help as much as you want or need me too.Please feel free to contact me.my e-mail is as follows:
macleod267 at gmail dot com.

Disregard first e-mail address I sent the correct one is above!!!!!!!

I really like the storyline and where this is going and would like to read more.Ishould mention to you that I have noticed some typo's and misspeled wording,but all in all it's very good.
I am not a beta but if you want I am offering help as much as you want or need me too.Please feel free to contact me.my e-mail is as follows:
macleod26 at gmail dot com.

love lilith great name. i am glad she isn't given into him and just letting him walk all over her......love the longer chapter

Lilith is a beautiful and fitting name for the snake. =)
And here I thought it would be harder for Bella to get books about dark magic stuff...Hope she'll find what she's looking for.
Bella and Caius are kinda cute in a dark and a little twisted way... =) Both so stubborn and hateful, getting off on others' and their own pain...Like I said, perfect match ;-)